She seems more embarrassed than angry in the first panel so I'd say this is an improvement! And I would accept it without hesitation, too bad it will never happen to me.
"I found it on the net. a translated version of my own manga. The "tsundere" blood writing even properly written to alphabet. I really enjoyed something like this. Please do more!"
Well, you can use it... if you want...It's not like I brought it for you or anything, you know?TsundereWhat is it?WHAT THE-LET'S SHARE THE UMBRELLA!